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vile synthetic prostitutes had taken their nest
local schools could no longer shun their wiles
away we walked with disappointment
knowing life only in a queenless society

restless with lust
we enlisted help in strangers
that would forsake even their name
come and love one we say
have an enemy with a crotch in reach

to grace all the errors
of their sweet decline
faith erred in favor
of redememing fools
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StarkNaked Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2004
I liked it, but the lack of grammer got to me.
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ihatechristmas Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2004
Great stuff. I like this sort of poetry.
Very nice word ultilization.
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